Film Review

 Our group is basically done with filming. So, we decided it was time we get some reviews from people we know. I figured it would not be smart to get reviews on our film from people that I am friends with. Nor would it be smart to get ones from family. This is because we want an objective review. Friends and family may have some bias. They may be more inclined to just say it was good rather than giving good constructive criticism. So, as a group we decided that we could ask our soccer coach. Our soccer coach, Coach Jaime, is great for this. She is not attached to the project in any way, and therefor would not have any ties or inclination to be bias. She also has a tendency to be blunt with her criticism. After watching, she was impressed with our film! However, she did suggest that we should fix the lighting in certain areas. It was a little dark in some of the indoor scenes, so we may have to edit or refilm them. She complimented our film by saying it had very good acting, and that the lines were not awkward, and had a nice flow. I was happy about this comment, because it was genuine. I am glad we picked her, because now we know what to adjust. We will begin our repairs soon. 



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